use a simple sentence to write the feeling

World building- naming the sensory details: make viewers to enter the story

imagery in a story-the fishes gathering around their feet

tension is important for the story-don’t make it too easy

Positionality/strategic self: put things that uncomfortable to say out loud into written words

metaphor-example:

personification-example: lonely sky

• tomorrow is too far
• the time invariance of snow, E. Lily Yu