use a simple sentence to write the feeling
World building- naming the sensory details: make viewers to enter the story
imagery in a story-the fishes gathering around their feet
tension is important for the story-don’t make it too easy
Positionality/strategic self: put things that uncomfortable to say out loud into written words
metaphor-example:
personification-example: lonely sky
- tomorrow is too far
- the time invariance of snow, E. Lily Yu